Wednesday, September 30, 2009
September 30, Entry 11
I'll tell you about my Volley Ball Game, we traveled to Albernett, in the first game Alexa was sevring great she took us to an early lead, 0-7, then Tessa she scored us a couple more making the score, 5-10 and in the end Nikki won us the game with a spike. Next game was won, next was a lose, followed by a lose and then a win, so for games won we're tied 3-3, We're a head 10-13. They're using they're best server an I set the ball over the net and win the game!!!!!!
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
That's awesome. I have to fix your last sentence. Please look to see how I've modeled the corrections.
ReplyDeleteThey're using their best server and I set the ball over the net to win the game!
Looks like you had a few errors. I know, this is free writing so that's okay. However, you should take notice of it. :)